Fire the broker

Seriously--here's a small part of a long and rambling description on a new listing: >>Extraordinary And Rarely Available!! Breath Taking Views From Every Room. You're Perfect Home!!! Absolutely Extraordinary In Many Aspects!!! << It goes on and on, sentence after sentence, in that fashion. If you've hired a broker to sell your two-point-something-mil apartment don't you think you'd at... [more]

Seriously--here's a small part of a long and rambling description on a new listing: >>Extraordinary And Rarely Available!! Breath Taking Views From Every Room. You're Perfect Home!!! Absolutely Extraordinary In Many Aspects!!! << It goes on and on, sentence after sentence, in that fashion. If you've hired a broker to sell your two-point-something-mil apartment don't you think you'd at least expect the listing to be legible and grammatically sound? Shouldn't that be a basic requirement? You know, that the broker knows how to string together a simple sentence and use paragraph breaks? And don't get me started on the inane Use Of Caps In Every Sentence. What's the point? It just makes the drivel even more difficult to read. The online listing is usually the first thing potential buyers see. It leaves an impression. Poor writing, bad grammar and run-on sentences just make the agent look careless and unprofessional. End of rant (for now). [less]